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Post by scootaloo22 on Jul 14, 2012 18:06:43 GMT -5
Name: Cloud Skipper Gender: Female Age: Mare Generation: FIM Species: Pony Location: Moved to Ponyville Status: N/A Appearance: has a blue coat, sky blue with crimson red eyes which she hides behind a pair of flying goggles, her wings are big and pretty same color as her coat, and has a white mane and tail, with red tips Personality: She is very shy, mostly on her own in her skyhouse, she floats around feeling free, when she has to be around other ponies she's in the corner shifting her eyes towards the floor talking to others in a low voice History: She came to Ponyville to live having to get away from Cloud city to get away from the crowded area to a more quiet down to earth place, she doesnt mind the earth ponies or unicorns shes alround and hangs out in her cloud house. Other: N/A Did you read the rules?: yes Read more: mylittleponyg1-fim.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=customapps&action=display&thread=2#ixzz20dkwjBfS
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Post by jackhallows on Jul 14, 2012 18:15:57 GMT -5
Seems good to me! Just need to work on the mass of commas and capitalization. Also, should note what kind of pony she is next to the Species slot, since she's a pegasus. All's well, otherwise. I say APPROVED.
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